Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-header-structure-18: (with COMMENT)

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Thu, 21 May 2020 00:28 UTC

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Hi Éric,

> On 20 May 2020, at 10:09 pm, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> -- Section 1 --
> In the sentence "the mechanisms described herein are only intended to be used
> with those that explicitly opt into them.", does "those" mean "existing HTTP
> header" or "header", this little ambiguity should be lifted.

Fixed with s/those/fields/

> -- Section 4.1.2 --
> Wow, I am impressed that nowadays, even a dictionary is sent as an HTTP header.
> (just a plain comment of mine even if an example would be useful for me).

:)

Thanks,

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