draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints-02 nits

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Fri, 07 October 2016 12:12 UTC

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From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
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Date: Fri, 7 Oct 2016 14:07:03 +0200
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Hi there,

two additional minor comments:

1) Given the state of the Key spec, it might be better to move 
everything related to that spec into an appendix.

2) I think it would be good to avoid the use of lowercase BCP14 
keywords. (and yes, I am aware that there's no IETF consensus about that :-)

Best regards, Julian