WGLC: p4 MUSTs
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Subject: WGLC: p4 MUSTs
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Hello, These comments are based on the "latest" snapshot dated Tue 30 Apr 2013 06:59:03 AM MDT at https://svn.tools.ietf.org/svn/wg/httpbis/draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html I hope these comments can be addressed by editors alone. > The If-Match condition is met if and only if any of the entity-tags > listed in the If-Match field value match the entity-tag of the > selected representation using the weak comparison function (as per > Section 2.3.2), or if "*" is given and any current representation > exists for the target resource. The "if and only if ... or if ..." construction looks funny. It is kind of correct because the first part applies to the non-* condition and the second part applies to the * condition, but still... Please consider dropping either "and only if" or the "if" in "or if". Can a proxy with an empty cache determine whether "any current representation exists for the target resource" without forwarding the request to the origin server? In other words, does "exists" mean "exists in the proxy cache" or "exists on the origin server"? Perhaps you can add some test to clarify the scope of resource existence here from the caching proxy point of view. The same two concerns apply to the If-None-Match section. Here is a list of requirement-like statements that seem to be missing MUST/SHOULD/MAY keywords to make them formal requirements and indicate the level of those requirements: > Preconditions are ignored if the server determines that an error or > redirect response applies before they are evaluated. > The conditional request header fields defined by this specification > are ignored for request methods that never involve the selection or > modification of a selected representation > The general rule of conditional precedence is that exact match > conditions are ... > Specifically, the fields defined by this specification are evaluated > as follows: Please consider rephrasing the above using RFC 2119 keywords and, where applicable, giving them explicit actors. Thank you, Alex.
- Working Group Last Call on the HTTPbis document s… Mark Nottingham
- Re: Working Group Last Call on the HTTPbis docume… Julian Reschke
- WGLC: p1 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUSTs Willy Tarreau
- WGLC: p2 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUSTs Willy Tarreau
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUST NOT pipeline until connection i… Alex Rousskov
- WGLC: p4 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- WGLC: p5 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- WGLC: p6 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- WGLC: p7 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- WGLC p1: MUST fix Content-Length? Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUST NOT pipeline until connection i… Willy Tarreau
- Re: WGLC p1: MUST fix Content-Length? Willy Tarreau
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUST NOT pipeline until connection i… Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC p1: MUST fix Content-Length? Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUST NOT pipeline until connection i… Willy Tarreau
- Re: WGLC p1: MUST fix Content-Length? Willy Tarreau
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUST NOT pipeline until connection i… Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC p1: MUST fix Content-Length? Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUST NOT pipeline until connection i… Willy Tarreau
- Re: WGLC: p5 MUSTs Ken Murchison
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUST NOT pipeline until connection i… Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p5 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p7 MUSTs Mark Nottingham
- Re: WGLC p1: MUST fix Content-Length? Mark Nottingham
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUSTs Mark Nottingham
- Re: WGLC: p5 MUSTs Mark Nottingham
- #481, was: WGLC: p7 MUSTs Julian Reschke
- Re: #481, was: WGLC: p7 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- Re: #481, was: WGLC: p7 MUSTs Julian Reschke
- Re: #481, was: WGLC: p7 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- Re: #481, was: WGLC: p7 MUSTs Julian Reschke
- Re: #481, was: WGLC: p7 MUSTs Julian Reschke
- #483, was: WGLC p1: MUST fix Content-Length? Julian Reschke
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUSTs Roy T. Fielding
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUSTs Alex Rousskov
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUSTs Roy T. Fielding
- Re: WGLC: p1 MUSTs Roy T. Fielding
- Re: WGLC: p2 MUSTs Roy T. Fielding
- Re: WGLC: p2 MUSTs Amos Jeffries
- Re: WGLC: p4 MUSTs Roy T. Fielding