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Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-16

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Sun, 30 May 2021 15:53 UTC

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Am 30.05.2021 um 16:14 schrieb Mohit Sethi via Datatracker:
> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-16
> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
> Review Date: 2021-05-30
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-10
> IESG Telechat date: 2021-06-17
>
> Summary: This draft specification defines HTTP caches and header fields for
> controlling the cache behavior.
>
> Major issues:
>
> Minor issues:
> - In the HTML version of the draft, the reference to [Semantics] does not work
> properly. I looked at the xml source which looks fine. I suspect it is
> something to do with the tooling.
> ...

Which specific HTML version did you use, and what was the problem?

Best regards, Julian

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