Re: [hybi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-09.txt

Takeshi Yoshino <tyoshino@google.com> Tue, 14 June 2011 06:38 UTC

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Side-by-side diff:
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-09

FYI, list of changes 8->9

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Semantic change
- any of RSV=1 : ignore the value -> _Fail the WebSocket Connection_
(section4.2)

Note addition, clarification
- example of subprotocol now doesn't contain space (section1.9)
- added note about message interleaving (section4.4)
- added note about close frame masking (section4.5.1)
- added note about version numbering (section5.1)
-- IANA version number registry 9 (actually, this won't be used)
(section11.12)
- added upgrade and connection header (section5.2.2)
- added note about what/how extension may modify (section6.2)
- big rewrite of security consideration about wrong encoding (section10)

Typo, etc.
- typo fixes
-- ws -> wss (section3)
-- host -> port (section3)
- style fixes
-- itemize (section3)
-- bullet point removal (section4.4)
-- moved out Note paragraph to the bottom of the subsection (section4.4)
-- phrasing fix (status-line) (section5.2.2)