[hybi] -05 editorial nits (future compression and random redundancy)

"Pat McManus @Mozilla" <mcmanus@ducksong.com> Fri, 11 February 2011 17:01 UTC

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I think -05 is great, we're really converging on something useful.

These are 2 small editorial issues from my last reading of it. Can we
add these to the tracker?

Section 1.5: "future versions will
   likely introduce additional concepts such as multiplexing and
   compression." .. This version introduces compression.

and then:

page 25 and page 30: the phrase "randomly selected randomly" seems to be cut and paste error?