Re: [hybi] -05 editorial nits (future compression and random redundancy)

Ian Fette (イアンフェッティ) <ifette@google.com> Sat, 12 February 2011 02:17 UTC

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The "randomly selected randomly" is already fixed in svn, the other I will
address tomorrow, currently on a layover at Minneapolis coming back from a
conference...

-Ian

On Fri, Feb 11, 2011 at 9:00 AM, Pat McManus @Mozilla
<mcmanus@ducksong.com>wrote;wrote:

> I think -05 is great, we're really converging on something useful.
>
> These are 2 small editorial issues from my last reading of it. Can we
> add these to the tracker?
>
> Section 1.5: "future versions will
>   likely introduce additional concepts such as multiplexing and
>   compression." .. This version introduces compression.
>
> and then:
>
> page 25 and page 30: the phrase "randomly selected randomly" seems to be
> cut and paste error?
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