Re: [hybi] I-D Action: draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-10.txt

Takeshi Yoshino <tyoshino@google.com> Tue, 12 July 2011 04:13 UTC

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Side by side:
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-10

Some typos

4.5.3.
A Pong frame sent in response to a Ping frame must have
must -> MUST

Client's handshake step 5 in 5.1
present in the client' handshake
client' -> client's

7.1.7.
remote endpoint after being instruted
instruted -> instructed