Re: [hybi] Some wordsmithing on draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-13

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Thu, 08 September 2011 11:48 UTC

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Subject: Re: [hybi] Some wordsmithing on draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-13
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Takeshi Yoshino wrote:

> Page 20, 3. doesn't contains -> doesn't contain
>
> Page 44, 7.2.3. recovey -> recovery
>
> Page 50, framing thay may "stack"
> I have no idea to what "thay" should be changed.

That was supposed to be "that".

> Page 52, mis- interpreted -> mis-interpreted

These all fixed in my copy.

> Page 52, UPGRADEd
> Is this intentional?

Yes. As in after issuing the HTTP Upgrade.

> Page 53, deemend -> deemed?
>
> Page 63, reson -> reason

Fixed these as well.