Re: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Thu, 26 May 2022 15:47 UTC

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From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 27 May 2022 00:46:57 +0900
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To: Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17
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Hi Gyan,
First of all, I thank you for your review and comments.
Here is my answer to your comments.
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*OLD:*

Appendix A.  XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model

   This section describes XML examples of the I2NSF Registration
   Interface data model under the assumption of registering several
   types of NSFs and querying NSF capability.
A.1.  Example 1: Registration for the Capabilities of a General Firewall

   This section shows an XML example for registering the capabilities of
   a general firewall in either IPv4 networks [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks
   [RFC3849].



*NEW:*
*Appendix A. XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model*

   This section shows XML examples of the I2NSF Registration Interface
   data model for registering the capabilities in either IPv4 networks
   [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks [RFC3849].

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I believe that two XML examples in Appendix A are useful to let the
audience use
this Registration Interface YANG Data Model in order to register the
capabilities of an NSF
as well as the performance capability and NSF access information with
Security Controller.
Note that both the performance capability and NSF access information do not
exist in
the I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model.

I attach the revised draft (-18) to be submitted to the IETF repository
after receiving and reflecting
the comments from Secdir later.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 1:30 PM Gyan Mishra via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
> Review result: Ready
>
> I reviewed the draft and the draft is well written and ready to be
> progressed
> for publication.
>
> One comment below.
>
> Appendix A contains XML examples of I2NSF Interface Data.
>
> Draft below also referenced by this draft contains as well the same
> identical
> examples but calls it examples of registration of capabilities and not
> registration interface data.
>
> As this draft is about the Yang Data and Information model for I2NSF
> registration interface between the security controller and DMS and not
> about
> registration capabilities data model defined in draft below,  I think the
> entire Appendix A can be removed from the draft.
>
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model
>
>
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