Re: [I2nsf] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-08.txt> (I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model) to Proposed Standard

[tom petch <[e-mail]>]

Looking at the YANG:

RFC4443 is referenced and so must be in the I-D References

RFC790 is referenced but this is now online under IANA - you can see the
IANA reference in
              draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-08
but that I-D needs to add it to the I-D references as this one will need
to; I note that this announcement flags it as a downref but think that 
that is misguided -  it needs replacing.

IPsec is the correct spelling - there are some IPSec in YANG
description clauses

Figure 8
    2.  The location of the NSF is 221.159.112.140.
This address does not appear in the XML, nor is it an address reserved
for use in documentation AFAICT; in fact, I cannot see any ipaddress 
anywhere in this I-D

s.2 correctly cites RFC8174 but does not use the text prescribed there.

  ' identity system-event-capability'
references system-alarm - system event would seem more apt. More
generally, these references for identity could be more specific, e.g
   identity access-violation
could reference 'access-violation ' rather than the more generic 'system
event'

Tom Petch


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> The IESG has received a request from the Interface to Network Security
> Functions WG (i2nsf) to consider the following document: - 'I2NSF
Capability
> YANG Data Model'
>   <draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-08.txt> as Proposed Standard
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> Abstract
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>    This document defines a YANG data model for the capabilities of
>    various Network Security Functions (NSFs) in the Interface to
Network
>    Security Functions (I2NSF) framework to centrally manage the
>    capabilities of the various NSFs.
>
> The file can be obtained via
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model/
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>
> The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D:
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>    https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/3556/
>    https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/3606/
>
> The document contains these normative downward references.
> See RFC 3967 for additional information:
>     rfc8329: Framework for Interface to Network Security Functions
(Informational - IETF stream)
>     rfc8192: Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF): Problem
Statement and Use Cases (Informational - IETF stream)
>     rfc790: Assigned numbers (Historic - Legacy stream)
>     rfc3444: On the Difference between Information Models and Data
Models (Informational - IETF stream)
>     draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model: I2NSF NSF Monitoring
YANG Data Model (None - IETF stream)
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