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Re: [I2nsf] some minor IDNITs of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Sat, 14 December 2019 00:50 UTC

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From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 14 Dec 2019 09:49:48 +0900
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To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>
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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] some minor IDNITs of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05
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Hi Linda,
We authors will address your comments.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

2019년 12월 14일 (토) 오전 7:20, Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>님이 작성:

> Authors of  draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-05
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> Thank you very much for making the changes to address YANG Doctor review.
> There are some minor editorial NITS from the document:
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>    - Page 3 second paragraph: there is duplicated “.”
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>    - Page 5 first paragraph under Figure 1: is “Using I2NSF user”
>    un-necessary?
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>    - Reference to “draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-01” is
>    older version. The current one is 02. Maybe don’t say the version number?
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> Same comment goes to other references to specific drafts.
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> Thank you.
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> Linda Dunbar
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