[I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17

Gyan Mishra via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 26 May 2022 04:30 UTC

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Subject: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17

Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
Review result: Ready

I reviewed the draft and the draft is well written and ready to be progressed
for publication.

One comment below.

Appendix A contains XML examples of I2NSF Interface Data.

Draft below also referenced by this draft contains as well the same identical
examples but calls it examples of registration of capabilities and not
registration interface data.

As this draft is about the Yang Data and Information model for I2NSF
registration interface between the security controller and DMS and not about
registration capabilities data model defined in draft below,  I think the
entire Appendix A can be removed from the draft.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model

[I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-r… Gyan Mishra via Datatracker
Re: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2n… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Re: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2n… Gyan Mishra
Re: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2n… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Re: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2n… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong