Re: [I2nsf] AUTH48 [AP]: RFC 9061 <draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-14.txt> NOW AVAILABLE

Gabriel Lopez <gabilm@um.es> Tue, 15 June 2021 13:48 UTC

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Hi Diego.

> El 14 jun 2021, a las 16:47, Diego R. Lopez <diego.r.lopez@telefonica.com> escribió:
> 
> Hi,
>  
> It looks reasonable to me, but I wonder whether in order to avoid the stacking of hyphenated qualifiers we could use:
>  
> A YANG Data Model for IPsec Flow Protection based on Software-Defined Networking (SDN)

The title seems ok to me.

Best regards, Gabi. 


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> On 14/06/2021, 09:24, "I2nsf on behalf of Rafa Marin-Lopez" <i2nsf-bounces@ietf.org <mailto:i2nsf-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of rafa@um.es <mailto:rafa@um.es>> wrote:
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> Dear I2NSF WG members:
>  
> We have received a suggestion from the RFC editor about a possible change in the title:
>  
> Software-Defined Networking (SDN)-based IPsec Flow Protection —>
>  
> A YANG Data Model for Software-Defined Networking (SDN)-based IPsec Flow Protection
>  
> We think this is reasonable and it is inline with the document.
>  
> If you do not have any objection, we can apply this change. Any thoughts?
>  
> Best Regards.
> 
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>> Inicio del mensaje reenviado:
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>> De: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
>> Asunto: Re: AUTH48 [AP]: RFC 9061 <draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-14.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
>> Fecha: 10 de junio de 2021, 22:58:29 CEST
>> Para: rafa@um.es <mailto:rafa@um.es>, gabilm@um.es <mailto:gabilm@um.es>, fernando.pereniguez@cud.upct.es <mailto:fernando.pereniguez@cud.upct.es>
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>> RFC9061 (draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-14)
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>> Title            : Software-Defined Networking (SDN)-based IPsec Flow Protection
>> Author(s)        : R. Marin-Lopez, G. Lopez-Millan, F. Pereniguez-Garcia
>> WG Chair(s)      : Linda Dunbar, Yoav Nir
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