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Re: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Fri, 27 May 2022 03:54 UTC

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From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 27 May 2022 12:53:29 +0900
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To: Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com>
Cc: Patrick Lingga <patricklink888@gmail.com>, draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm.all@ietf.org, "i2nsf@ietf.org" <i2nsf@ietf.org>, ops-dir@ietf.org, skku-iotlab-members <skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>
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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-17
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Gyan,
Thanks for your confirmation.

Best Regards,
Paul

On Fri, May 27, 2022 at 3:53 AM Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com> wrote:

>
> Hi Paul
>
> I reviewed your updated text as well as the attachment from SECDIR review
> and I am all set.
>
> Thank you
>
> Gyan
>
>
> On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 11:47 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Gyan,
>> First of all, I thank you for your review and comments.
>> Here is my answer to your comments.
>> -----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> *OLD:*
>>
>> Appendix A.  XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model
>>
>>    This section describes XML examples of the I2NSF Registration
>>    Interface data model under the assumption of registering several
>>    types of NSFs and querying NSF capability.
>> A.1.  Example 1: Registration for the Capabilities of a General Firewall
>>
>>    This section shows an XML example for registering the capabilities of
>>    a general firewall in either IPv4 networks [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks
>>    [RFC3849].
>>
>>
>>
>> *NEW:*
>> *Appendix A. XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model*
>>
>>    This section shows XML examples of the I2NSF Registration Interface
>>    data model for registering the capabilities in either IPv4 networks
>>    [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks [RFC3849].
>>
>> -----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> I believe that two XML examples in Appendix A are useful to let the
>> audience use
>> this Registration Interface YANG Data Model in order to register the
>> capabilities of an NSF
>> as well as the performance capability and NSF access information with
>> Security Controller.
>> Note that both the performance capability and NSF access information do
>> not exist in
>> the I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model.
>>
>> I attach the revised draft (-18) to be submitted to the IETF repository
>> after receiving and reflecting
>> the comments from Secdir later.
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>> Best Regards,
>> Paul
>>
>> On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 1:30 PM Gyan Mishra via Datatracker <
>> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>>
>>> Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
>>> Review result: Ready
>>>
>>> I reviewed the draft and the draft is well written and ready to be
>>> progressed
>>> for publication.
>>>
>>> One comment below.
>>>
>>> Appendix A contains XML examples of I2NSF Interface Data.
>>>
>>> Draft below also referenced by this draft contains as well the same
>>> identical
>>> examples but calls it examples of registration of capabilities and not
>>> registration interface data.
>>>
>>> As this draft is about the Yang Data and Information model for I2NSF
>>> registration interface between the security controller and DMS and not
>>> about
>>> registration capabilities data model defined in draft below,  I think the
>>> entire Appendix A can be removed from the draft.
>>>
>>>
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model
>>>
>>>
>>>
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