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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Request for I2NSF Draft Review
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Hi &nbsp;I2NSF WG,

I reviewed the I2NSF Registration Interface YANG Data Model.
This draft is&nbsp;&nbsp;well written and ready to be progressed&nbsp;for publication.

One comment below.

In '4.1.2. NSF access Information' an example of access information is described by including VLAN.
But, in '5 Data Model' NSF access information, it was described only with IP and port.
It would be good to add VLAN as an option in '5 Data Model' NSF access information



-----Original Message-----
From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" &lt;jaehoon.paul@gmail.com&gt;
To: "Penglin Yang" &lt;yangpenglin@chinamobile.com&gt;; "Meiling Chen" &lt;chenmeiling@chinamobile.com&gt;;
Cc: "JungSoo Park" &lt;pjs@etri.re.kr&gt;; "Yunchul Choi" &lt;cyc79@etri.re.kr&gt;; "Patrick Lingga" &lt;patricklink888@gmail.com&gt;; "Jeong Hyeon Kim" &lt;jeonghyeonkim92@gmail.com&gt;; "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" &lt;jaehoon.paul@gmail.com&gt;;
Sent: 2022-07-19 (화) 20:49:27 (UTC+09:00)
Subject: Request for I2NSF Draft Review

Hi Penglin and Meiling,How are you nowadays?I need reviewers for I2NSF Consumer Facing Interface YANG Data Model andI2NSF Registration Interface YANG Data Model under I2NSF WGLC:-&nbsp; I2NSF Consumer Facing Interface YANG Data Model&nbsp;https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-21 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-21- &nbsp;I2NSF Registration Interface YANG Data Modelhttps://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-18 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm-18Could each of you review one of them, respectively, this week?If you can do&nbsp;it, you can give your review comments to the I2NSF mailing list.With this review, it will be helpful for you to proceed withour I2NSF remote attestation draft.Thanks.Best Regards,Paul--
===========================Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.Associate Professor
Department HeadDepartment of Computer Science and EngineeringSungkyunkwan UniversityOffice: +82-31-299-4957Email: pauljeong@skku.edu mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu,&nbsp;jaehoon.paul@gmail.com mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.comPersonal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php

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