Re: [I2nsf] [IPsec] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-08.txt> (Software-Defined Networking (SDN)-based IPsec Flow Protection) to Proposed Standard

Fernando Pereñíguez García <fernando.pereniguez@cud.upct.es> Wed, 23 September 2020 11:18 UTC

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From: Fernando Pereñíguez García <fernando.pereniguez@cud.upct.es>
Date: Wed, 23 Sep 2020 13:19:46 +0200
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Cc: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>, Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, i2nsf@ietf.org, draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection@ietf.org, "ipsec@ietf.org WG" <ipsec@ietf.org>, LAST-CALL@ietf.org, i2nsf-chairs@ietf.org
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Hi Tom,

Thanks for clarifying this, now we completely understand these two
comments. We will update the next version of the draft accordingly.

Regards,
Fernando.

El mié., 23 sept. 2020 a las 12:39, tom petch (<daedulus@btconnect.com>)
escribió:

> On 23/09/2020 07:16, Fernando Pereñíguez García wrote:
> > Hi Tero,
> >
> > Thank you very much for your clarification. We will update reference RFC
> > 822 accordingly in our draft.
> >
> > Tom, you proposed us to replace RFC 822 with 2822, but it is also
> obsoleted
> > by 5322. So, if you agree, we will reference RFC 5322 instead.
>
> That is fine by me; my comment was that RFC822 is obsoleted by RCC2822
> so you should consider a more up-to-date version not that RFC2822 was
> the correct update!
>
> You said previously that you did not understand my comment on RFC6020 in
> IANA Considerations.  It is fine.  What I was trying to say is that in
> most places, RFC7950 is the better reference so RFC6020 should not be
> used but for IANA Considerations, RFC6020 is the better reference so
> when updating elsewhere in the I-D, leave IANA Considerations alone.
>
> Tom Petch
>
>
>
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