Re: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-ephemeral-state-17.txt

Joe Clarke <jclarke@cisco.com> Tue, 20 September 2016 18:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-ephemeral-state-17.txt
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On 9/20/16 14:08, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : I2RS Ephemeral State Requirements
>         Authors         : Jeff Haas
>                           Susan Hares
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-i2rs-ephemeral-state-17.txt
> 	Pages           : 11
> 	Date            : 2016-09-20
>
> Abstract:
>    The I2RS (interface to routing system) Architecture document
>    (RFC7920) abstractly describes a number of requirements for ephemeral
>    state (in terms of capabilities and behaviors) which any protocol
>    suite attempting to meet I2RS needs has to provide.  This document
>    describes in detail requirements for ephemeral state for those
>    implementing the I2RS higher-protocol.

I have found some issues in this document.  See:

https://www.marcuscom.com/draft-ietf-i2rs-ephemeral-state-17.txt-from-.diff.html

XML diff is attached.

Joe