Re: [i2rs] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard

"tom p." <daedulus@btconnect.com> Mon, 26 March 2018 16:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [i2rs] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard
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Yan

It resolves my comments but... :-(

there is a line length problem with that description clause
" description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier defined in RFC
7348)s that the fabric has.";
[not sure what e-mail will do with this but in the I-D, the line length
is too long]

draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo is now RFC8345
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt is now RFC8346
draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt is now RFC8344

the Copyright date is 2016

the URL to the licence information should be https not http (sigh)

"Please replace the data in the revision statement with the data of
publication when published.";
/data/date/ 2

data model [6020][7950]
I would expect to see [RFC6020][RFC7950]

uh huh

I am not sure who the AD is now for this work so they probably need
adding to the addressees of any further e-mail.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" <zhuangyan.zhuang@huawei.com>
To: "tom p." <daedulus@btconnect.com>; <ietf@ietf.org>
Cc: <i2rs@ietf.org>;
<draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@ietf.org>;
<i2rs-chairs@ietf.org>; <shares@ndzh.com>; <akatlas@gmail.com>
Sent: Monday, March 19, 2018 4:01 AM

> Hi Tom,
>
> Thank you for your comments.
> We changed the words in description statement as you suggested and
added an introductory section before the module codes in section "Fabric
YANG Module". The draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis is added as well.
>
> We think the new version-07 resolved all your comments :) Thank you.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Yan (on behalf of all authors)
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: tom p. [mailto:daedulus@btconnect.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 8:30 PM
> To: ietf@ietf.org
> Cc: i2rs@ietf.org;
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology@ietf.org;
i2rs-chairs@ietf.org; shares@ndzh.com; akatlas@gmail.com
> Subject: Re: Last Call:
<draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data
Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard
>
> I see
>
> description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s
that the fabric has";
>
> which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which
will not work as the YANG module must be plain text.
>
> I suggest an introductory section along the lines of
>
> This module imports ...
> from ...
> and references [RFC7348]
>
> along the lines of
> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis
> without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "The IESG" <iesg-secretary@ietf.org>
> To: "IETF-Announce" <ietf-announce@ietf.org>
> Cc: <i2rs@ietf.org>;
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> <i2rs-chairs@ietf.org>; <shares@ndzh.com>; <akatlas@gmail.com>
> Sent: Friday, March 09, 2018 9:28 PM
> Subject: Last Call:
> <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data
Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard
>
>
> >
> > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing
> System WG
> > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for
> Fabric
> > Topology in Data Center Networks'
> >   <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> as
Proposed
> >   Standard
> >
> > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and
solicits
> final
> > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the
> > ietf@ietf.org mailing lists by 2018-04-03. Exceptionally, comments
may
> be
> > sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the
> beginning of
> > the Subject line to allow automated sorting.
> >
> > Abstract
> >
> >
> >    This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in
Data
> >    Center Network.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > The file can be obtained via
> >
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
> topology/
> >
> > IESG discussion can be tracked via
> >
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
> topology/ballot/
> >
> >
> > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
> >
> >
> > The document contains these normative downward references.
> > See RFC 3967 for additional information:
> >     rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A
> Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3
Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream)
> >
> >
> >
>
>