[i2rs] 答复: Comment: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-10

"Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com> Thu, 12 July 2018 14:41 UTC

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From: "Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com>
To: Rodney Cummings <rodney.cummings@ni.com>, "i2rs@ietf.org" <i2rs@ietf.org>
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Hi Rodney, 

Thanks for your comments. We will provide some reference/description in next revision.

Best regards,
Jie

> -----邮件原件-----
> 发件人: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Rodney Cummings
> 发送时间: 2018年7月12日 8:29
> 收件人: i2rs@ietf.org
> 主题: Re: [i2rs] Comment: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-10
> 
> Hello all,
> 
> I just realized that I included the wrong I-D in my subject line. I intended this
> comment for:
> 	draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology
> and not
> 	draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology
> 
> I apologize for the mistake.
> 
> Rodney Cummings
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: i2rs <i2rs-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Rodney Cummings
> > Sent: Tuesday, July 10, 2018 2:53 PM
> > To: i2rs@ietf.org
> > Subject: [i2rs] Comment:
> > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-
> > 10
> >
> > Hello,
> >
> > This module does not provide sufficient description/reference text.
> > For
> > example:
> > - What is a "VLAN ID"?
> > - What is a "TRILL Nickname"?
> > - What is a "VxLAN Network Indentifier"?
> > - What is "QinQ"?
> > - What is a "Shared Risk Link Group"?
> > - Where does "Maximum frame size" begin and end for a given media?
> >
> > If the author prefers to avoid a description, at least a reference
> > should be provided so that the normative definition can be determined.
> >
> > Rodney Cummings
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: i2rs <i2rs-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of
> > > internet-drafts@ietf.org
> > > Sent: Saturday, June 30, 2018 1:42 AM
> > > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > > Cc: i2rs@ietf.org
> > > Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
> > > topology-10.txt
> > >
> > >
> > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > > directories.
> > > This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG
> > > of
> > the
> > > IETF.
> > >
> > >         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data
> > > Center Networks
> > >         Authors         : Yan Zhuang
> > >                           Danian Shi
> > >                           Rong Gu
> > >                           Hariharan Ananthakrishnan
> > > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-
> > > 10.txt
> > > 	Pages           : 31
> > > 	Date            : 2018-06-29
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > >    This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data
> > >    Center Networks and it represents only one possible view of the dc
> > >    fabric.
> > >
> > >
> > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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