[i2rs] Comments re: draft-i2rs-ephemeral-state-12

"Alexander Clemm (alex)" <alex@cisco.com> Fri, 01 July 2016 00:13 UTC

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From: "Alexander Clemm (alex)" <alex@cisco.com>
To: "Susan Hares (shares@ndzh.com)" <shares@ndzh.com>
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Hi Susan,

this document looks very good & I clearly support it.

Just two very minor comments:


-          editorial nits - page  2:  "Sections 7" --> "Section 7"; "is I2RS protocol requirement" --> "is an I2RS protocol requirement"



-          I consider Ephemeral-REQ-03 as very important ("may have constraints that refer to operational state").  I am wondering, should the draft mention how to deal with the fact that it is possible for operational state to dynamically change.  I would think it is might be worth stating something to the effect that constraints should be assessed when ephemeral state is written, and that situations are conceivable where violations of such constraints might occur due to changing of operational state after the write occurred.   By the nature of the issue, the framework must allow for that; how to deal with such a situation and maintain integrity of the ephemeral configuration in such cases is up to the client.


One thought re: section 9, clearly we have a requirement to support subscriptions against ephemeral data; is there a requirement for subscriptions to be ephemeral themselves?  (I think it is implicitly supported via dynamic subscriptions.)

Thanks
--- Alex