Re: [i2rs] Comment: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-10

[Rodney Cummings <[e-mail]>]

Hello all,

I just realized that I included the wrong I-D in my subject line. I intended this comment for:
	draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology
and not
	draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology

I apologize for the mistake.

Rodney Cummings

> -----Original Message-----
> From: i2rs <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Rodney Cummings
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> Subject: [i2rs] Comment: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-
> 10
> 
> Hello,
> 
> This module does not provide sufficient description/reference text. For
> example:
> - What is a "VLAN ID"?
> - What is a "TRILL Nickname"?
> - What is a "VxLAN Network Indentifier"?
> - What is "QinQ"?
> - What is a "Shared Risk Link Group"?
> - Where does "Maximum frame size" begin and end for a given media?
> 
> If the author prefers to avoid a description, at least a reference should
> be provided so that the normative definition can be determined.
> 
> Rodney Cummings
> 
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> > Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
> > topology-10.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of
> the
> > IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data
> > Center Networks
> >         Authors         : Yan Zhuang
> >                           Danian Shi
> >                           Rong Gu
> >                           Hariharan Ananthakrishnan
> > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-
> > 10.txt
> > 	Pages           : 31
> > 	Date            : 2018-06-29
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data
> >    Center Networks and it represents only one possible view of the dc
> >    fabric.
> >
> >
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