[i2rs] AD review of draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-06
Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com> Sat, 30 July 2016 03:46 UTC
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Subject: [i2rs] AD review of draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-06
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First, I would like to thank the WG and the authors, Sue, Daniel, & Joel, for their work on this document. As is customary, I have done my AD review of draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-06. I have only a couple nits. I have requested an IETF Last Call and expect this to be on the telechat for Aug 18. Nits: 1) update references to I2RS Architecture and Problem-statement to the published RFCs. 2) bottom of page 6: "in order to simply the first version of I2RS " s/simply/simplify Regards, Alia