Re: [i2rs] Comment: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-10

Hi Rodney,

Thank you for the comments. We will provide those description/reference texts in next version.

Best Regards,

Yan
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发件人: i2rs [i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Rodney Cummings [rodney.cummings@ni.com]
发送时间: 2018年7月11日 3:52
收件人: i2rs@ietf.org
主题: [i2rs] Comment: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-10

Hello,

This module does not provide sufficient description/reference text. For example:
- What is a "VLAN ID"?
- What is a "TRILL Nickname"?
- What is a "VxLAN Network Indentifier"?
- What is "QinQ"?
- What is a "Shared Risk Link Group"?
- Where does "Maximum frame size" begin and end for a given media?

If the author prefers to avoid a description, at least a reference should be provided so that the normative definition can be determined.

Rodney Cummings

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>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data
> Center Networks
>         Authors         : Yan Zhuang
>                           Danian Shi
>                           Rong Gu
>                           Hariharan Ananthakrishnan
>       Filename        : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-
> 10.txt
>       Pages           : 31
>       Date            : 2018-06-29
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