Re: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-09.txt

["Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom, Qin,

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Rob Wilton (rwilton)
> Sent: 27 August 2019 14:23
> To: tom petch <[e-mail]>; Qin Wu <[e-mail]>;
> [e-mail]
> Cc: Susan Hares <[e-mail]>
> Subject: RE: I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-09.txt
> 
> Hi Tom,
> 
> Please see inline ...
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: i2rs <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of tom petch
> > Sent: 23 August 2019 17:39
> > To: Qin Wu <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
> > Cc: Susan Hares <[e-mail]>
> > Subject: Re: [i2rs] I-D Action:
> > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-
> > 09.txt
> >
> > Qin
> >
> > I said that I might look some more and I have.
> >
> > I still think that you need references for 802.1ad and 802.1ah.  It is
> > not a question of whether or not they are imported, it is where does
> > the reader go to find out more about e.g. QinQ and that needs nailing
> > down to a specific document, and in the case of the IEEE, that needs a
> > date, as you give for 802.1Q.
> >
> > Talking of which, I find that Rob imports that IEEE module from a
> > different document; 802.1Qcp; um.
> [RW]
> 802.1Qcp (https://standards.ieee.org/standard/802_1Qcp-2018.html) is the
> amendment to 802.1Q-2018 (https://standards.ieee.org/standard/802_1Q-
> 2018.html) that defines some bridging YANG models and the ieee802-dot1q-
> types.yang YANG models.
> 
> I've emailed the relevant folks at IEEE to ask what the correct reference
> is, and then presumably we can be consistent for all RFCs.

[RW]
The conclusion from the IEEE 802 YANG folks (on email, and confirmed on the IEEE Yangsters call today) is that the reference should be to "IEEE Std 802.1Qcp-2018".

Thanks,
Rob


> 
> Thanks,
> Rob
> 
> 
> >
> > And, in the same vein, I would like a reference for LLDP.
> >
> > /defned/defined/
> >
> > leaf rate
> > what are the units?
> >
> >         leaf maximum-frame-size {
> > what is a frame, what headers are included and what not?  This is a
> > fraught topic
> >
> > /ternimation point/termination point/
> >
> >      leaf vlan-name {
> > any constraints on length or character set?  I like them although am
> > conscious that some YANG doctors do not.
> >
> >      leaf encapsulation {
> > the description exceeds the permissible line length for an RFC
> >
> >           type enumeration {
> >             enum in-use {
> >              value 0;
> > again a personal preference - I like to see zero kept for a special
> > purpose (e.g. cannot be determined) unless there is a strong reason to
> > use it (e.g. it is what the protocol has been using for years)
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Qin Wu" <[e-mail]>
> > Sent: Monday, August 19, 2019 8:08 AM
> >
> > > v-09 is posted to address Tom's comments.
> > > The diff is:
> > >
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topo
> > lo
> > gy-09
> > > Becuase datatracker pyang integration tool issue, Data model
> > "ieee802-dot1q-types" can not been found
> > > And imported into the model defined in this draft.
> > >
> > > -Qin
> > > -----邮件原件-----
> > > 发件人: I-D-Announce [mailto:[e-mail]] 代表
> > [e-mail]
> > > 发送时间: 2019年8月19日 15:04
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> > > 抄送: [e-mail]
> > > 主题: I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-09.txt
> > >
> > >
> > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > directories.
> > > This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG
> > > of
> > the IETF.
> > >
> > >         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network
> > Topologies
> > >         Authors         : Jie Dong
> > >                           Xiugang Wei
> > >                           Qin Wu
> > >                           Mohamed Boucadair
> > >                           Anders Liu
> > > Filename        : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-09.txt
> > > Pages           : 31
> > > Date            : 2019-08-19
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > >    This document defines a YANG data model for Layer 2 network
> > >    topologies.
> > >
> > > Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)
> > >
> > >    Please update these statements within the document with the RFC
> > >    number to be assigned to this document:
> > >
> > >    o  "This version of this YANG module is part of RFC XXXX;"
> > >
> > >    o  "RFC XXXX: A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network Topologies";
> > >
> > >    o  reference: RFC XXXX
> > >
> > >    Please update the "revision" date of the YANG module.
> > >
> > >
> > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > >
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topol
> > og
> > y/
> > >
> > > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > >
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-0
> > 9
> > >
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-
> > to
> > pology-09
> > >
> > > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > >
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topo
> > lo
> > gy-09
> > >
> > >
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