Re: [i2rs] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with COMMENT)

"Zhuangyan (Yan)" <zhuangyan.zhuang@huawei.com> Wed, 18 April 2018 09:20 UTC

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From: "Zhuangyan (Yan)" <zhuangyan.zhuang@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [i2rs] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Alexey,

Thank you for the comment. It has been fixed in version-09.

Best Regards,

Yan

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Subject: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with COMMENT)

Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Nit:

1.  Introduction

   These fabrics may be heterogeneous due to implementation of different
   technologies when a DC network is upgraded or new techniques and
   features are enrolled.

enrolled --> rolled out?