Re: [i2rs] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard

["Zhuangyan (Yan)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,

Thank you very much for your detailed comments. 
We've incorporated your comments into version-08. We also updated other referred drafts if they are also published in March :)

Best Regards,

Yan(on behalf of all authors)

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Yan

It resolves my comments but... :-(

there is a line length problem with that description clause " description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier defined in RFC 7348)s that the fabric has."; [not sure what e-mail will do with this but in the I-D, the line length is too long]

draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo is now RFC8345 draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-16.txt is now RFC8346 draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis-03.txt is now RFC8344

the Copyright date is 2016

the URL to the licence information should be https not http (sigh)

"Please replace the data in the revision statement with the data of publication when published."; /data/date/ 2

data model [6020][7950]
I would expect to see [RFC6020][RFC7950]

uh huh

I am not sure who the AD is now for this work so they probably need adding to the addressees of any further e-mail.

Tom Petch

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> Hi Tom,
>
> Thank you for your comments.
> We changed the words in description statement as you suggested and
added an introductory section before the module codes in section "Fabric YANG Module". The draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis is added as well.
>
> We think the new version-07 resolved all your comments :) Thank you.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Yan (on behalf of all authors)
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: tom p. [mailto:[e-mail]]
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>
> I see
>
> description "Number of vni(VXLAN Network Identifier, see [RFC7348])s
that the fabric has";
>
> which looks like XML/HTML style reference in the YANG module, which
will not work as the YANG module must be plain text.
>
> I suggest an introductory section along the lines of
>
> This module imports ...
> from ...
> and references [RFC7348]
>
> along the lines of
> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis
> without which [RFC7348] will be an unused Reference.
>
> Tom Petch
>
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> <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> (A YANG Data
Model for Fabric Topology in Data Center Networks) to Proposed Standard
>
>
> >
> > The IESG has received a request from the Interface to the Routing
> System WG
> > (i2rs) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Data Model for
> Fabric
> > Topology in Data Center Networks'
> >   <draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-06.txt> as
Proposed
> >   Standard
> >
> > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and
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> > Abstract
> >
> >
> >    This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in
Data
> >    Center Network.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > The file can be obtained via
> >
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
> topology/
> >
> > IESG discussion can be tracked via
> >
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-
> topology/ballot/
> >
> >
> > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
> >
> >
> > The document contains these normative downward references.
> > See RFC 3967 for additional information:
> >     rfc7348: Virtual eXtensible Local Area Network (VXLAN): A
> Framework for Overlaying Virtualized Layer 2 Networks over Layer 3
Networks (Informational - Independent Submission Editor stream)
> >
> >
> >
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