new iafa draft
R M Heery <lisrmh@bath.ac.uk> Mon, 18 December 1995 13:00 UTC
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From: R M Heery <lisrmh@bath.ac.uk>
To: Jon Knight <J.P.Knight@lut.ac.uk>
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Subject: new iafa draft
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Just been reading through the new draft you circulated (thanks!) and have a few comments, see below. I fully support the re-issue of the draft. We are using IAFA templates in a number of new implementations as part of the eLib project, and we need a working document to reflect changes and developments of the templates. Comments: 1. The original draft focusses on the use of IAFA templates to describe the contents of ftp archives. As the context of the use of IAFA templates has broadened, particularly in the use by the eLib subject service to build up databases of a whole variety of networked resources, then perhaps this could be reflected in the draft? I think a few words in the abstract and introduction to change the focus would be useful. Similarly in section 6 it is assumed that all creators of the templates will be administrators of ftp archives. 2. The last sentence of the introduction needs to be amended as this document is no longer available.... 3. In section 6.4.2 you have left a data element described as 'Library cataloguing information'. I assumed this should be changed to Subject Descriptor, as you have outlined later in the document? 4. In 8.4.4 Note 3 I think it would be worth including a subject heading scheme as I understand this would be valid e.g. LCSH Library of Congress Subject Headings Rachel ----------------------------------------------------------------- Rachel Heery ROADS Research Officer UKOLN (UK Office of Library and Info Networking) tel: +44 (0)1225 826724 University of Bath, Bath BA2 7AY, UK fax: +44 (0)1225 826838
- new iafa draft R M Heery
- Re: new iafa draft Jon Knight
- Re: new iafa draft Thomas Krichel
- Re: new iafa draft Thomas Krichel
- Re: new iafa draft R M Heery
- Re: new iafa draft Chris Weider
- Re: new iafa draft Thomas Krichel
- Re: new iafa draft Jon Knight
- Re: new iafa draft Thomas Krichel
- Re: new iafa draft Larry Masinter
- Re: new iafa draft Jon Knight
- Re: new iafa draft Thomas Krichel
- Re: new iafa draft Larry Masinter
- Re: new iafa draft Martin Hamilton