Re: [Ianaplan] Updated text Re: Please keep context in mind Re: Consensus call -- text reply for ICG proposal review

[Richard Hill <[e-mail]>]

I object to Eliot's version, because it implies that this group has studied all parts of the ICG proposal and approves all parts.

Best Richard

On August 24, 2015 6:38:18 PM CEST, Eliot Lear <[e-mail]> wrote:
>Hi Leslie,
>
>On 8/24/15 6:22 PM, Leslie Daigle (ThinkingCat) wrote:
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> Bearing in mind the context below, it seems to us that the text
>> currently under discussion for consensus (with thanks to Brian and
>> Richard, all) is:
>>
>> “The IETF IANAPLAN working group supports the draft ICG proposal
>going
>> forward, as far as the Protocol Parameters function is concerned. 
>The
>> IETF raised two transition points that are mentioned in Paragraph
>3062
>> of the proposal.  We would ask that they be referenced in Part 0,
>> Section V of the proposal as well.”
>
>I don't think this text is there yet, so please class this as an
>objection.  The issue remains that this reads as though we are
>approving
>a single portion of text that we have contributed.  Realistically I do
>not know how the ICG would take such a comment.  It is akin to saying
>nothing, since support for the text we contributed is well known.  And
>therefore, we would be better off saying nothing.  Rather than do that,
>however, I propose an alternative, as follows:
>
>    The IETF IANAPLAN working group has reviewed the ICG proposal and
>    found no concerns relating to our activities, and therefore support
>    its advancement on that basis.  The IETF raised two transition
>    points that are mentioned in Paragraph 3062 of the proposal.  We
>    would ask that they be referenced in Part 0, Section V of the
>    proposal as well.
>
>
>This makes clear that we are not making statements beyond how this
>proposal will impact us.
>
>Eliot
>
>
>
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