[Ianaplan] Ted Lemon's No Record on charter-ietf-ianaplan-00-04: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [Ianaplan] Ted Lemon's No Record on charter-ietf-ianaplan-00-04: (with COMMENT)
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Ted Lemon has entered the following ballot position for charter-ietf-ianaplan-00-04: No Record When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-ianaplan/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- This isn't a strong objection, but I find this text a little unclear: Registries of parameter values for use in IETF protocols are stored and maintainted for the IETF by the Internet Assigned Numbers Authority (IANA), and are the subject of the "IANA Considerations" section in many RFCs. For a number of years, maintenance of the IETF protocol parameters registries has been provided by the Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN). I think it would be clearer if the second paragraph started thusly: Registries of parameter values for use in IETF protocols are stored and maintainted for the IETF by the Internet Assigned Numbers Authority (IANA), and are the subject of the "IANA Considerations" section in many RFCs. For a number of years, the IANA function has been provided by the Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN). Otherwise you're repeating information from the first paragraph, and not directly describing the connection between IETF and ICANN. Of course any sensible person will make the connection, hence the weakness of this objection, but I don't think it's necessary to make the reader do this work. Rather than verbing a noun here with "to transition out of", why not say "to relinquish" or "to give up"? 2014, NTIA announced its intention to transition out of its current I think this is a worthwhile effort, although I agree with Pete that it could fail to work on a process level; I just don't see that as a reason not to try.
- Re: [Ianaplan] [Iana-strategy] Ted Lemon's No Rec… Alissa Cooper
- [Ianaplan] Ted Lemon's No Record on charter-ietf-… Ted Lemon
- Re: [Ianaplan] [Iana-strategy] Ted Lemon's No Rec… Ted Lemon
- Re: [Ianaplan] [Iana-strategy] Ted Lemon's No Rec… Milton L Mueller