Re: [Ianaplan] Updated text Re: Please keep context in mind Re: Consensus call -- text reply for ICG proposal review

John C Klensin <john-ietf@jck.com> Tue, 25 August 2015 17:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ianaplan] Updated text Re: Please keep context in mind Re: Consensus call -- text reply for ICG proposal review
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--On Tuesday, August 25, 2015 12:58 -0400 "Leslie Daigle
(ThinkingCat)" <ldaigle@thinkingcat.com> wrote:

> I do, though, fear it reads a little piecemeal and puzzling.
> 
> Addressing the scope question head on, I could suggest:
> 
> The IETF IANAPLAN WG has reviewed the draft ICG proposal
> within the context of the WG's charter (<ref>) —
> specifically, "Should proposals made by other communities
> regarding the transition of other IANA functions affect the
> IETF protocol parameter registries or the IETF, the WG may
> also review and comment on them."   The IETF IANAPLAN
> working group continues to believe that a transition away from
> a US Government role in IANA management and oversight is
> appropriate and confirms consensus of its participants that
> the draft proposal is not perceived to pose problems for the
> Protocol Parameters function.    The IETF raised two
> transition points that are mentioned in Paragraph 3062 of the
> proposal.  We would ask that they be referenced in Part 0,
> Section V of the proposal as well.

FWIW, I agree about "piecemeal and puzzling".  The above
variation works for me.  For the record, others might as well,
but this is, AFAICT, best yet.

    john