Re: [Iasa20] Barry Leiba's Discuss on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org> Thu, 11 April 2019 15:02 UTC

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From: Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org>
Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2019 11:01:50 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] Barry Leiba's Discuss on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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On Wed, Apr 10, 2019 at 2:14 PM Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> wrote:

> Joe, the -09 version sorts out my DISCUSS issue, so I'll clear that.
> I'm going to leave the non-DISCUSS comments in for the record, but the
> only one that I think still could use action is this one:
>
> > >> — Section 6.10 —
> > >> What does “from time to time” mean here?  I can’t figure out how to
> fit the
> > >> normal English meaning of the idiom in here
> > >
> > > Hmmm, I don't find this confusing but a term like "as needed" may be
> more clear?
> > > I don't think we intend to limit the ability of the board to adjourn
> official business
> > > until they can get a quorum of folks in the room.
> >
> > Ah, I see what you're getting at, then.  So I would just remove the
> > phrase altogether; what remains says exactly what you mean:
> >
> > NEW
> >    If a quorum is not present at any
> >    meeting of the Board, the Directors present may adjourn the meeting
> >    without notice, other than announcement at the
> >    meeting, until a quorum is present.
> > END
>
>
Will make this change in -10:

https://github.com/IASA2/draft-ietf-iasa2-struct/issues/102


> Thanks for the work on this, Joe -- and all the others who
> participated in the discussion.
>

Thank you for great feedback and engagement!

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