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Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)

Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org> Thu, 11 April 2019 18:02 UTC

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From: Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org>
Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2019 14:02:18 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)
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On Thu, Apr 11, 2019 at 14:00 Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> wrote:

>
>
> On 11 Apr 2019, at 13:54, Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org> wrote:
>
> I'd really rather not, but that's just author-clingy-ness and an aversion
> to big changes in text. One proposal would be just eliminate everything but
> the first paragraph of the Abstract (I think all of that is repeated at
> greater length in the intro).
>
>
> Actually, I think you’re fine if you drop everything but the LAST
> paragraph.  That paragraph very succinctly states what the document is.
> Also keep the last sentence about obsoleting RFC 4071.
>

Thank you. Would love to hear from others.

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