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Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)

Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org> Thu, 11 April 2019 17:54 UTC

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From: Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org>
Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2019 13:54:35 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)
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On Thu, Apr 11, 2019 at 13:48 Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> On 11 Apr 2019, at 11:05, Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org> wrote:
>
> Thanks, Ben! Responses inline, pointing to opened github issues that we'll
> bang out shortly...
>
> On Thu, Apr 11, 2019 at 9:24 AM Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> Four paragraphs is fairly long for an Abstract.
>>
>>
> This is a pretty foundational document, so I think it's a rarity.
>
>
>
> You’d be surprised how often that is said.  It would be good to crunch
> down.  A non-lawyer has to read this thing.
>

I'd really rather not, but that's just author-clingy-ness and an aversion
to big changes in text. One proposal would be just eliminate everything but
the first paragraph of the Abstract (I think all of that is repeated at
greater length in the intro).

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