[Iasa20] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-09.txt
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Subject: [Iasa20] Fwd: New Version Notification for
draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-09.txt
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The IESG approved this draft for publication earlier today once a new version was published.
This new version was published that has changes from the IESG review. This includes:
* Added text to Abstract noting that this revision addresses only
the changes required for IASA 2.0 and other changes will be
addressed in future documents.
* Changes based on comments from the IESG reviews:
+ Remove RFC3747 from Abstract because this document is only
based on RFC7437.
+ Making member, director, and trustee terminology consistent.
+ Changed "nominated" to "selected" in Section 3.2.
+ Add Trustee to end of second paragraph of Section 3.7.1.
+ Correct section reference to [I-D.ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis] in
Section 3.4
+ Clarify that there are two and three terms in Section 3.5.
bullet 4. B.
+ Add Trustee to Section 3.8 section title and first
paragraph.
+ Clarify that there are only term limits for IAB and IESG
members in Appendix C bullet 4.
+ Add IETF Trust and IETF LLC to Appendix D bullet 3.
+ Spelled out IETF Administrative Support Activity (IASA) on
first use in Section 1.
+ Minor editorial changes
Bob
> Begin forwarded message:
>
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-09.txt
> Date: July 11, 2019 at 3:23:08 PM PDT
> To: "Robert M. Hinden" <bob.hinden@gmail.com>om>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>om>, "Murray Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>om>, "Robert Hinden" <bob.hinden@gmail.com>om>, "Jason Livingood" <Jason_Livingood@comcast.com>om>, <iasa2-chairs@ietf.org>rg>, "Jason Livingood" <jason_livingood@comcast.com>
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-09.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Cindy Morgan and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis
> Revision: 09
> Title: IAB, IESG, IETF Trust and IETF LLC Selection, Confirmation, and Recall Process: Operation of the IETF Nominating and Recall Committees
> Document date: 2019-07-11
> Group: iasa2
> Pages: 42
> URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-09.txt
> Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis/
> Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-09
> Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis
> Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-09
>
> Abstract:
> The process by which the members of the IAB and IESG, some Trustees
> of the IETF Trust, and some Directors of the IETF LLC are selected,
> confirmed, and recalled is specified in this document. This document
> is based on RFC7437. Only those updates required to reflect the
> changes introduced by IASA 2.0 have been included. Any other changes
> will be addressed in future documents.
>
> This document obsoletes RFC7437 and RFC8318.
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