Re: [Iasa20] Barry Leiba's Yes on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc5377bis-02: (with COMMENT)

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From: Joel Halpern <joel.halpern@ericsson.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] Barry Leiba's Yes on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc5377bis-02: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Barry.  Got these just before I went to upload -03.  I have applied both corrections.

Yours,
Joel

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Subject: Barry Leiba's Yes on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc5377bis-02: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc5377bis-02: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Two nits in the Abstract (and, yes, I know the first one was there in the original):

   The Trustees of the IETF Trust accepts direction from the IETF
   regarding the rights to be granted.

As “The Trustees” is plural, the verb needs to be so as well: “accept”.

There’s a missing space before the last sentence.