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Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)

Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org> Thu, 11 April 2019 18:07 UTC

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From: Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org>
Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2019 14:07:17 -0400
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To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Cc: Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com>, IASA 2 WG <iasa20@ietf.org>, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)
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On Thu, Apr 11, 2019 at 2:05 PM Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> wrote:

> >> You’d be surprised how often that is said.  It would be good to crunch
> down.  A non-lawyer has to read this thing.
> >
> > I'd really rather not, but that's just author-clingy-ness and an
> aversion to big changes
> > in text. One proposal would be just eliminate everything but the first
> paragraph of the
> > Abstract (I think all of that is repeated at greater length in the
> intro).
>
> How about this as a compromise?:
>
>    The IETF Administrative Support Activity (IASA) was originally
>    established in 2005.  In the years since then, the needs of the IETF
>    evolved in ways that required changes to its administrative
>    structure.  The purpose of this document is to document and describe
>    the IASA 2.0 structure, explaining the structure of the new IETF
>    Administration Limited Liability Company, the roles and responsibilities
>    that are involved, and the membership and selection of the IETF LLC
> Board.
>
>    This document obsoletes RFC 4071, RFC 4333, and RFC 7691.
>

 I like this; disregard my previous suggestion. Holler if it doesn't work
for anyone.

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