[Iasa20] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 30 July 2019 17:51 UTC

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-07-30
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This is a well written document making an administrative update to RFC
7776 and it is ready for publication in this format.

However, given that RFC 7776 may be read by someone who is distressed having
been harassed, and who may not know about errata, I wonder if it would be
better to issue a clean copy of the main RFC with these (and no other) changes.
 If needed the RFC Editor could simply apply these edits to their master copy.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
  == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of