[Iasa20] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02
Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 30 July 2019 17:51 UTC
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Subject: [Iasa20] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02
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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2019-07-30 IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-14 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This is a well written document making an administrative update to RFC 7776 and it is ready for publication in this format. However, given that RFC 7776 may be read by someone who is distressed having been harassed, and who may not know about errata, I wonder if it would be better to issue a clean copy of the main RFC with these (and no other) changes. If needed the RFC Editor could simply apply these edits to their master copy. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: == Outdated reference: A later version (-09) exists of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-06
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