Re: [Iasa20] AD review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-04

"Livingood, Jason" <Jason_Livingood@comcast.com> Sun, 24 February 2019 20:45 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] AD review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-04
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[JL] I am working on edits now in response to your list. I will comment as/if needed as I go. Here is one:
> == Section 3.5 ==
> Since we have an entire document about the IETF-ISOC relationship (draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis), why is this section needed?

[JL] It is a very short section - a few sentences. The idea was to give a quick sense of the IETF-ISOC relationship at a high level - so folks need not necessarily read the other longer document to see all the details.