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Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Thu, 11 April 2019 18:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)
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>> You’d be surprised how often that is said.  It would be good to crunch down.  A non-lawyer has to read this thing.
>
> I'd really rather not, but that's just author-clingy-ness and an aversion to big changes
> in text. One proposal would be just eliminate everything but the first paragraph of the
> Abstract (I think all of that is repeated at greater length in the intro).

How about this as a compromise?:

   The IETF Administrative Support Activity (IASA) was originally
   established in 2005.  In the years since then, the needs of the IETF
   evolved in ways that required changes to its administrative
   structure.  The purpose of this document is to document and describe
   the IASA 2.0 structure, explaining the structure of the new IETF
   Administration Limited Liability Company, the roles and responsibilities
   that are involved, and the membership and selection of the IETF LLC Board.

   This document obsoletes RFC 4071, RFC 4333, and RFC 7691.

Barry

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