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Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)

Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Thu, 11 April 2019 18:00 UTC

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Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2019 14:00:33 -0400
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To: Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org>
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)
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> On 11 Apr 2019, at 13:54, Joseph Lorenzo Hall <joe@cdt.org> wrote:
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> I'd really rather not, but that's just author-clingy-ness and an aversion to big changes in text. One proposal would be just eliminate everything but the first paragraph of the Abstract (I think all of that is repeated at greater length in the intro).

Actually, I think you’re fine if you drop everything but the LAST paragraph.  That paragraph very succinctly states what the document is.  Also keep the last sentence about obsoleting RFC 4071.

Eliot

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