Re: [Iasa20] AD review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-06

Bob Hinden <bob.hinden@gmail.com> Fri, 07 June 2019 15:10 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] AD review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-06
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Alissa,

> On Jun 7, 2019, at 7:46 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
> 
> Thanks, one response below.
> 
>> ….
>> 
>>> I would suggest adding a reference to draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd.
>> 
>> I can easily add a reference, but wasn’t sure how to mention it in the text.  Suggestions?
> 
> I think you can just say "(See Section 2 of [RFC3710] and [I-D.ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd])” instead of "(See Section 2 of [RFC3710]).”

That works, I will make the change and submit later this morning.

Bob

> 
> Alissa
> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> It also says:
>>> 
>>> "The guidance regarding IAB mid-term vacancies in 3.8 is a little unclear: what exactly is the difference between steps 3 and 4? If there is a difference, should 4 come before 3?"
>>> 
>>> I think 3 should be deleted.
>> 
>> Done.
>> 
>>> 
>>> Nits:
>>> 
>>> Please fix the nits noted in the shepherd write-up.
>>> 
>>> In all of Section 3, all of Section 4 (except 4.15), Section 5.11, and Section 5.12:
>>> 
>>> s/IETF LLC/IETF LLC Board/
>>> 
>>> = Abstract =
>>> 
>>> s/This document based on RFC3777/This document is based on RFC3777/
>> 
>> Done.
>> 
>> <draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-07-from-6.diff.html>
>> 
>> 
>