Re: [Iasa20] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis-05: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Livingood, Jason" <Jason_Livingood@comcast.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis-05: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis-05: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks! The changes will be made shortly in a -06 update. 

Jason

On 8/19/19, 11:32 AM, "Alvaro Retana via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis-05: No Objection
    
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    Two easy to address comments:
    
    (1) §1: "As a result of the the IASA 2.0 structure [I-D.ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis]
    and formation of the IETF LLC, the relationship between the IETF and ISOC has
    changed."  I think that I-D.ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis should be a Normative
    reference.
    
    (2) I-D.ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis uses this document as a Normative reference, and
    points to it when defining ISOC (in §4.1); but there is no explicit reference
    to ISOC, or even its mission (which seems to be quoted in §2).  Please add one.