Re: [Iasa20] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-08: (with COMMENT)

[Bob Hinden <[e-mail]>]

Adam,

> On Jul 8, 2019, at 7:44 PM, Adam Roach via Datatracker <[e-mail]> wrote:
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> Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-08: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> Thanks to all the participants in the IASA2 effort for the work you've
> done in getting the related documents updated. I only have three minor
> comments in this document, where it seems to have been incompletely
> updated with regard to IETF Trust Trustees.
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> §3.3:
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>> e.g., if
>> the IESG, IAB, IETF Trust, or IETF LLC Board have reorganized prior
>> to this process and created new positions, if there are an odd number
>> of current positions, or if a member or Director unexpectedly
>> resigns.
> 
> Suggest: "...if a Member, Director, or Trustee..."
> 
> In particular, mixing the lowercase "member" with the uppercase "Director"
> is rather jarring.
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> §3.4:
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>> which it may assign a term of not more than three years to ensure
>> that all such members or Directors will not be reviewed at the same
>> time.
> 
> Same comment as above ("Member, Director, or Trustee")
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> §3.8:
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>> 3.8.  Sitting Members and Directors
>> 
>> The following rules apply to nominees and candidates who are
>> currently sitting members of the IESG or IAB, or IETF LLC Board
>> Directors and who are not sitting in an open position being filled by
>> the NomCom.
> 
> The title and opening paragraph of this section omit "Trustees," although
> the remainder of the section mentions Trust vacancies. I think we need to add
> mention of Trustees to both the section title and its opening paragraph.

Thanks, all fixed in my local copy.

Bob