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Re: [Iasa20] WGLC: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis

"Livingood, Jason" <Jason_Livingood@comcast.com> Wed, 02 January 2019 21:17 UTC

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From: "Livingood, Jason" <Jason_Livingood@comcast.com>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, "iasa20@ietf.org" <iasa20@ietf.org>
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See diff at https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis-02.txt 

On 1/2/19, 4:14 PM, "iasa20 on behalf of Livingood, Jason" <iasa20-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of Jason_Livingood@comcast.com> wrote:

    Thanks - will fix in the next revision (as well as a fix suggested by John Levine that I saw in the queue). 
    
    On 12/21/18, 8:55 PM, "Brian E Carpenter" <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
    
        The draft seems fine to me.
        
        Nits:
        
        >    In 2018, the IASA was revised under a new "IASA 2.0" structure by the
        >    IASA2 Working Group, which made signifincant revisions to the IETF's
        s/signifincant/significant/
        >    administrative, legal, and financial structure.  One critical outcome
        >    was that the formation, in close cooperation between the IETF and
        s/that//
        >    ISOC, of the IETF Administration Limited Liability Company (IETF LLC)
        >    as a subsidiary of ISOC.
        
        ...
        
        > 8.  Security Considerations
        > 
        >    This document introduces no new security considerations.
        > 
        >    [RFC Editor: Please remove this section upon publication.]
        > 
        > 9.  Privacy Considerations
        > 
        >    This document introduces no new privacy considerations.
        > 
        >    [RFC Editor: Please remove this section upon publication.]
        
        No, we don't remove those sections when they're blank. And in theory,
        a blank IANA Considerations section is also needed.
        
        Regards
           Brian Carpenter
        
    
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