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Re: [Iasa20] I-D Action: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-04.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 04 January 2019 00:49 UTC

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To: Bob Hinden <bob.hinden@gmail.com>, iasa20@ietf.org
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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] I-D Action: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-04.txt
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Hi Bob,
On 2019-01-04 08:27, Bob Hinden wrote:
> The new version has the following changes:
> 
>       *  Added IETF Trust to the title.
>       *  Changed references to point to current IASA 2.0 structure
>          document [I-D.ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis]
>       *  Added IETF Trust to a few places it was missing.
>       *  Editorial changes.
> 
> These are based on comments received during the last call and to have it reference draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis.

I think the section references to Section 4 of 4071bis all need to be changed to
Section 5. Otherwise, it looks good.

   Brian

> Should be ready to go.
> 
> Bob
> 
> 
> 
>> On Jan 3, 2019, at 11:23 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the IETF Administrative Support Activity 2 WG of the IETF.
>>
>>        Title           : IAB, IESG, IETF Trust and IETF LLC Selection, Confirmation, and Recall Process: Operation of the IETF Nominating and Recall Committees
>>        Authors         : Murray S. Kucherawy
>>                          Robert M. Hinden
>>                          Jason Livingood
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-04.txt
>> 	Pages           : 40
>> 	Date            : 2019-01-03
>>
>> Abstract:
>>   The process by which the members of the IAB and IESG, some Trustees
>>   of the IETF Trust, and some Directors of the IETF LLC are selected,
>>   confirmed, and recalled is specified in this document.  This document
>>   based on RFC3777 and RFC7437 and has been updated to reflect the
>>   changes introduced by IASA 2.0.
>>
>>   This document obsoletes RFC7437 and RFC8318.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-04
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-04
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-04
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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