Re: [Iasa20] WGLC: RFC 7776-bis (oops)

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Tue, 26 March 2019 16:24 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] WGLC: RFC 7776-bis (oops)
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Thanks!

(No, really, thanks).

You are right. We should fix that as well. It is a simple change and we will
add it to the document as...

            <t>Section 5 of RFC  7776 <xref target="RFC7776" /> is about
Remedies (available to the Ombudsteam).  The last paragraph of that section
is replaced as follows:</t>
            <OLD>
               <list style="none">
                  <t>Where specific action is required to ensure that a
remedy is realized or enforced, the Ombudsteam will make a request in
writing to the IETF Secretariat and/or IETF Administrative Director (IAD) to
take action as appropriate.</t>
               </list></t>
            <t>NEW
               <list style="none">
                  <t>Where specific action is required to ensure that a
remedy is realized or enforced, the Ombudsteam will make a request in
writing to the IETF Secretariat and/or IETF LLC Executive Director to take
action as appropriate.</t>
               </list></t>

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Adrian
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-----Original Message-----
From: S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com> 
Sent: 25 March 2019 10:07
To: adrian@olddog.co.uk; iasa20@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Iasa20] WGLC: RFC 7776-bis (oops)

Hi Adrian,
At 07:48 AM 24-03-2019, Adrian Farrel wrote:
>It's been a while since I looked at this, but it all seems to still 
>be in order.

There is an instance of "IETF Administrative Director" in the last 
paragraph of Section 5 of RFC 7776.  Section 4.1 of 
draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08 defines that role as obsoleted and 
replaces it with "IETF LLC Executive Director".

Regards,
S. Moonesamy