[Iasa20] Suresh Krishnan's Yes on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: (with COMMENT)

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Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-09: Yes

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* Section 1

s/Internet Administrative Oversight Committee (IAOC)/IETF Administrative
Oversight Committee (IAOC)/

* Section 3

"maximum unilateral flexibility for the IETF LLC"

What does unilateral mean here? As opposed to what?

* Section 4.1

I would have thought IASA 2.0 would be defined using the definition currently
used for "IASA" and IASA would be defined as the obsoleted version of this
defined in RFC4071.

* Section 4.6

Since this talks about leadership a reference to IRSG may be more appropriate
than the IRTF as a whole?

* Section 6.5

It is not clear from this text if someone serves as a Board appointed director
for a term, whether they are eligible for two more terms using other methods or
only one more. I think this will be worth clarifying.

* Section 7.7

"The IETF LLC exists to support the IETF, IAB, and IRTF"

Not sure why the RFC Editor is left out here. Suggest changing to

"The IETF LLC exists to support the IETF, IAB, IRTF and the RFC Editor"