[Iasa20] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-08: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7437bis-08: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks to all the participants in the IASA2 effort for the work you've
done in getting the related documents updated. I only have three minor
comments in this document, where it seems to have been incompletely
updated with regard to IETF Trust Trustees.

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§3.3:

>  e.g., if
>  the IESG, IAB, IETF Trust, or IETF LLC Board have reorganized prior
>  to this process and created new positions, if there are an odd number
>  of current positions, or if a member or Director unexpectedly
>  resigns.

Suggest: "...if a Member, Director, or Trustee..."

In particular, mixing the lowercase "member" with the uppercase "Director"
is rather jarring.

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§3.4:

>  which it may assign a term of not more than three years to ensure
>  that all such members or Directors will not be reviewed at the same
>  time.

Same comment as above ("Member, Director, or Trustee")

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§3.8:

> 3.8.  Sitting Members and Directors
>
>  The following rules apply to nominees and candidates who are
>  currently sitting members of the IESG or IAB, or IETF LLC Board
>  Directors and who are not sitting in an open position being filled by
>  the NomCom.

The title and opening paragraph of this section omit "Trustees," although
the remainder of the section mentions Trust vacancies. I think we need to add
mention of Trustees to both the section title and its opening paragraph.