Re: [Icar] ICAR draft charter rev 3

Hi Alex,

Just a couple of minor questions/comments:

>      The WG will cooperate with others in starting and evaluating
>      experiments with early community and structured reviews.

Are you intending that the word "early" is applied to both community
and structured reviews, or only to community reviews in this sentence?
In other words, do you mean that this group will work on both structured
and unstructured early review, or is it also intended to work on changes
to the final/later review process?

>      FEB 2004: Publish Internet Drafts on improved community and 
> structured reviews

I'd rather see separate sets of drafts (I assume that these are two
separate sets of drafts?) have separate entries.  Also, is this
intended to be a deadline for the community to submit ideas that will
be considered in the final proposals?  Or is this the date for
publication of the first WG I-Ds?

>      SEP 2004: Submit draft on improved community review to
>                the IESG for publication as BCP
>      SEP 2004: Submit draft on improved structured community review to
>                the IESG for publication as BCP

Based on the definitions that you included earlier in the charter,
I think that "structured community review" is an oxymoron.

Margaret

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